Ancillary Draft 2: Assessment Record

Self Assessment	WWW: -good framing for both photos -applied folios EBI: -better location for advert -apply a clear colour scheme to newsaper article -standfirst is too long
Peer Assessment	N/A
Teacher Assessment	Newspaper Feedback Advert Feedback
Grade	The grade I received for this task was C/B (for DPS) and E (for advert) This is on for the DPS and below for the advert of my target grade of a B
Targets to Improve	To improve this work I need to: -think of better slogan for advert -choose different location for advert -design for newspaper article needs to be more challenging -picture of newspaper article doesn't to article